Lakes are the earths mirrors,
when Mother Earth needs to see herself,
she can just look at Lake Superior.
If a mountain is brushing his teeth,
he will be looking at Lake Chelan.
But if the wind picks up,
it's bad luck for all of us,
for the lake
will be shattered.
4 comments:
This is, quite frankly, one of the most amazing "What if?" poems I have read.
Amazing. Just amazing dane. I would have to say this is better than mine. But were is your riddle poem. Keep it up.
Wow... That was a very nice poem. Good job! Very imaginative, with the Lake Superior being a mirror. A good post, Dane. See you at school, man.
HI DANE! That poem was really really good. I like the ending of how the lake/mirror gets shattered. You picked a really good topic. You should do some more!
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