I like this poem, Not only because it is about hitting people or violence. But because you hit me in the head with a dodge ball. (: nice poem, im really interested in it. I hope to read your next poem.
Nice poem. I thought it was really funny. Did you really hit two girls in the head? You should keep doing poems. You are very good at them. Nice blog Dane.
I believe you hit me in the head too. Square in the face. I went on playing though, after a few minutes. :) You throw really hard, by the way (this was when I was in Snelling's class). Good game and good poem.
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Interesting poem. Try to slip in a metaphor or simile. One comparision will take it to the next level.
I like this poem,
Not only because it is about hitting people or violence.
But because you hit me in the head with a dodge ball.
(:
nice poem, im really interested in it.
I hope to read your next poem.
Nice poem. I thought it was really funny. Did you really hit two girls in the head? You should keep doing poems. You are very good at them. Nice blog Dane.
I believe you hit me in the head too. Square in the face. I went on playing though, after a few minutes. :) You throw really hard, by the way (this was when I was in Snelling's class). Good game and good poem.
~Cassie
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