Dear Future Self, You better become an Astronaut. I want to see you fly into space. Watch you shoot into the sky, like a giant bullet. So I will wait for you. Until you launch into space, and look over the world
Nice job, Dane. It'd be really fun to be an astronaut. Or a "Star Sailor." Good choice for a topic to write the poem on. Do you want to be an astronaut?
Do you really want to be an astronaut! That would be really awesome. I like your I'm sorry poem. It's funny they do need to suck it up, it's just a dodge ball. You should do some more poems.
Nice job on your poem Dane. It was cool how you were talking from the future. It would be cool to be an astronaut. Do you want to be an astronaut? You should keep writing poems. Good job Dane.
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Great choice of topic! You are thinking out-of-the-box.
Nice job, Dane. It'd be really fun to be an astronaut. Or a "Star Sailor." Good choice for a topic to write the poem on. Do you want to be an astronaut?
Do you really want to be an astronaut! That would be really awesome. I like your I'm sorry poem. It's funny they do need to suck it up, it's just a dodge ball. You should do some more poems.
Nice job on your poem Dane. It was cool how you were talking from the future. It would be cool to be an astronaut. Do you want to be an astronaut? You should keep writing poems. Good job Dane.
Hi Dane. I like you topic. I never thought about writing to myself in the future. That is very interesting. I will talk to you later.
sweet poem. you did a good job on your poem. so you want to be an astronaut. that would be cool. well i will see you later.
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